I find myself writing that “the visibility is poor”

TCD MS 11274/72 folio 1 verso

TCD MS 11274/72 folio 1 verso

[?1917] to an accepted form. I find myself writing that “the visibility is poor” instead of “a misty day”. I am glad to report good progress in my trench. I think you’re quite right to take assigned pay as they owe me pay all right. Did you ever have any answer from them about the other that you returned. I saw a nice little party of ‘Huns; coming back from the trenches in charge of 4 very Bairnsfather tommies.
Well my Dearie Wm L.S. will write you a letter some day soon. LS has asked her to
Good night my Dearie
Your very lovingly
Pat